Remember I don't claim to be a writer but I hope you join me and see if we can have a laugh. So, get your pen poised and either write a 55 word story on your own blog, or you can post it in my comments below.
come
sit down
next to me
warm skin on mine
let me feel your breath
gently ruffling my auburn hair
nestling on your chest
listening to the rhythm
of your heart
beating for
me
look
gaze down
azure eyes ablaze
hanging on every word
worshiping your every phrase
melody to my ears
sweet harmony
adoration

13 comments:
You are a writer girl - this is stunning.
I......LOVE....THAT !!!
That was a truly sensual 55 ....
Am all tingly now!!
Have a great weekend Gillian!
A love story so very sensual. :)
Great 55. :)
Three words...this is HOT!
Mine is "LOST IN THE TRANSLATION"
Have a great weekend! [and as always, scroll down a bit to find my 55]
Not a writer? I have to disagree. Sexy 55 and well written, at that!
I'm up (with a few extra words):
Friday Flash 55 ~ Butterfly Kisses
yeah, you done prety good...whew. love it. nice 55...
mine is up!
warm and fluid, such a beautiful 55!
Such a moment of love! Perfect!
You're not a writer? Quit bull shitting yourself. That was a great piece of writing. Made me squirm....in a good way.
Awesome 55. Loved it. You sure are a good writer...:)
You are definitely a writer! Gorgeous!
whew.
i'm new to the Flash 55 thing, but i'm liking it...
nice to find you.
cute,
I feel your warmth in your words, I picture sitting next to you...
Happy Sunday,
Your 55 rocks!
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