Friday, 9 July 2010

55 Flash Fiction Friday - Episode 12

Join me in playing this writing game with hundreds of other bloggers including G-Man, Steveroni and Brian Miller  called 55 Flash Fiction Fridays.





Eyes cast down
Motionless
Pondering
Picking my thumb nails
Feeling my heart bleed
Knowing I ought to be suffering
But unable to sense the pain
Disconnected and muted
Unsure and scared
My carefully assembled wall
Constructed slowly and
Mysteriously behind my back
Unaware of its progression
Wondering how I collaspe it 
without destroying myself?


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12 comments:

PattiKen said...

Powerful words, very moving. I'm catching a bit of a dark breeze our here in cyberspace this week. Interesting.

Kelley @ magnetoboldtoo said...

I echo PattiKen's words, very powerful.

Brian Miller said...

oh a tough question...is it us or is that an illusion? i suggest a sledge hammer and that you will be quite all right. smiles. thanks for the name drop as well...

my 55 is up!

Claudia said...

Very moving - and deep, deep feelings - our
carefully assembled walls - think all of us have them and we hate when they fall down - leaving us unprotected

steveroni said...

LIKE this, because it is the situation of SO many of us humans. Just remember each day is ne, a new beginning, we can start again any hour, any minute. And with God's help, "things" will get better, and soon. GOOD 55 post. Thanks!

Mine is HERE

Akelamalu said...

It's hard to get the wall down once it's up. :(

Great 55 m'deario.

Sassy Pants Freckle Face said...

I likie! Followin u from FUFF!!

Monkey Man said...

Deconstruction or Reconstruction? It's all perspective. Great 55. My 55 is HERE .

g-man said...

Jillie Bean...?
You have walls?
With a Moat?
Make em do a little climbing, It's well wirth the effort!
Excellent 55 My Friend.
Thanks for playing today...You Rock Baby!!
Have a Kick Ass Week-End...G

Mona said...

that is really a tough question! breaking such walls will peel away your skin as they go

Alice Audrey said...

We're in tune this week.

The Wolf said...

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