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including G-Man, Steveroni and Brian Miller called 55 Flash Fiction Fridays.
Eyes cast down
Motionless
Pondering
Picking my thumb nails
Feeling my heart bleed
Knowing I ought to be suffering
But unable to sense the pain
Disconnected and muted
Unsure and scared
My carefully assembled wall
Constructed slowly and
Mysteriously behind my back
Unaware of its progression
Wondering how I collaspe it
without destroying myself?
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12 comments:
Powerful words, very moving. I'm catching a bit of a dark breeze our here in cyberspace this week. Interesting.
I echo PattiKen's words, very powerful.
oh a tough question...is it us or is that an illusion? i suggest a sledge hammer and that you will be quite all right. smiles. thanks for the name drop as well...
my 55 is up!
Very moving - and deep, deep feelings - our
carefully assembled walls - think all of us have them and we hate when they fall down - leaving us unprotected
LIKE this, because it is the situation of SO many of us humans. Just remember each day is ne, a new beginning, we can start again any hour, any minute. And with God's help, "things" will get better, and soon. GOOD 55 post. Thanks!
Mine is HERE
It's hard to get the wall down once it's up. :(
Great 55 m'deario.
I likie! Followin u from FUFF!!
Deconstruction or Reconstruction? It's all perspective. Great 55. My 55 is HERE .
Jillie Bean...?
You have walls?
With a Moat?
Make em do a little climbing, It's well wirth the effort!
Excellent 55 My Friend.
Thanks for playing today...You Rock Baby!!
Have a Kick Ass Week-End...G
that is really a tough question! breaking such walls will peel away your skin as they go
We're in tune this week.
This is my first visit to your blog. You have a great site here with some very interesting posts.
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