Friday, 4 June 2010

55 Flash Fiction Friday - Episode 7

Join me in playing this writing game with hundreds of other bloggers including G-Man on Fridays, called 55 Fiction Fridays, or 55 Fridays.  The idea is to write a complete story in only 55 words.

So, get your pen poised and either write a 55 word story on your own blog, or you can post it in my comments below. Its all good and I do it for fun.  Give it a go!

Hold it firmly

Not too tight

Never Squeeze

Moisten your lips

Cover the tip with your mouth, gently suck

Slowly trail your tongue around the rim

Then lazily lick up the sides

Don’t mess a single drop


Never bite

Like an angel

Dancing in

your mouth









Over at MummyTime


Brian Miller said...

nice 55. smiles.

i like ice cream too....

HOOTIN' ANNI said...

LOL....gotta love this!!! I really like it....or should I say 'lick' it!!

And the 'mooncup'...I just read about that too on your other blog. Makes sense to me.

Have a great weekend.

John's comments said...

ooh missus, have to have lie down after that. Here's mine

Jingle said...

sweet and yummy 55.
u r an apt writer!

kirstyb said...

oooh in 55 i couldnt x

G-Man said...

I can see the sweet cream dribbling down your chin right now!
Here's a napkin...
Excellent 55 Gillie Bean.
Your Hubby is one lucky bastard!
Thanks for playing, thanks for visiting, and have a Kick Ass Week-End...G

Monkey Man said...

Knew you wouldn't go "there". Fune 55. My 55 is HERE .

Alice Audrey said...

HAH! I knew it would be ice cream cones.

Akelamalu said...

LOL I wasn't thinking ice-cream! :0

Katherine said...

Ooh Gillian... you're a cheeky girl! I like ice-cream too!!

Gillian said...

I enjoyed writing this one.

Ed Pilolla said...

this is fun. one of the more clever 55 ones i read. very cool.


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